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Chapter 1:Unknown Forces
It was another nice day on Fort Patterson when an unknown army showed up.
Jason:“Sir, I got something on radar. There is something out there and it reached our territory . Looks like an army preparing to attack”
Edward:“It’s the rebels.I knew it. Villagers told me about Kane, their leader.”
Malcolm:“Why are they doing?”
Edward:“They want total control of the area and enslave the villagers.They sworn to destroy any military in the area”
Malcolm:“If they want war, they will have war! People, get ready for war.”
Edward:“Roger!”
Edward:“Listen, the rebels are preparing for a siege. They are almost near our gates. Grab your gear and prepare for battle. It’s about time we kicked this revolution into overdrive”
Josh:“Kane is back again?”
Edward:“Yeah. He wants total control of the area.”
Edward:“Jim, get your pilots ready. I’ll call you when I need air support.”
Jim:“Ready when you are!”
Edward:“Excellent!”
Edward went to his men
Edward:“Yo! Saddle Up! Lock and load! Let’s moveout!”
The men left the fort.
Nick:“Are we gonna die?”
Edward:“We’re gonna die, I’ll gonna die, you’re gonna die, we’re all gonna die, just not today! Keep it positive Nick.”
Nick:“Alright sarge.”
Edward’s men took cover on the bushes and awaits to ambush the enemy.
Josh:“Now, we wait.”
Edward:“Stay sharp.”
Josh:“You heard the man, don’t fall asleep just yet.”
Sam:“I had a good sleep last night hey”
Josh:“Then stay focused, I can already hear 'em coming”
The fort is preparing artillery batteries.
Jason: “Startup the defences. Remember to expect the worse.”
James:“North towers ready to rock and roll!”
Jack:“East towers online!”
Jake:“West is up and ready”
Jean:“South towers watching your backs!”
Spec Ops team Raptor Squad is ordered to scout ahead
Laurence:“Alright team listen up. Our job during this conflict is to scout.Satellite will have difficulties scouting over thick canopy. Thermals is not always reliable.We will hide in the shadows and report to command what we saw. Any questions?”
Michael:“Boss, this just sucks.Why can’t we fight in the frontlines?”
Laurence:“We have our orders”
Jake:“Yes sarge why don’t we just go help 'em”
Laurence:“Can it you two! We will be helping them by being scouts for them.”
Leon:“Stealth is my especiality.”
Aaron:“Yeah.Me too”
Laurence:"Alright, grab your gear and move out
Raptor squad went near the conflict.
Jake:“The battle is already underway.”
Laurence:“Stick to the shadows.”
Michael:“The jungle will be rocking tonight.”
Jake:“Yeah. I hope Tarzan will come-out of his hiding and help us out!”
Michael:“What about Kong? We sure need some brute fire power.”
Laurence:“Keep quiet you knuckle heads!”
Jake & Michael:“Alright sarge.”
Aaron:“Why don’t they just send a drone to scout ahead?”
Michael;“I don’t know.”
Edward’s Team commenced attack against the rebels.
Arthur:“Why are we fighting robots?”
Edward:“What? Kane’s army is made out of robots?”
Josh:“Kane’s a Cyborg what do you expect?”
Edward:“Now I understand.”
Arthur:“C’mon you apes. Wanna live forever?”
Tychus:“Jimmy, my shields are down, cover me!”
Jim:“Got you covered.”
Tychus:“Woa! That was close.”
Jim:“Mortar fire…Incoming!”
Tychus:“Hey wait up!”
Jim:“Take cover!”
Tychus:“Send in the artillery. We need artillery sarge.”
Edward:“Command we need artillery support.”
Josh:“On the way…Raptor Team, artillery bombaredment is commencing. Stay clear of the area.”
To be continued