GPS14's sketchbook

GPS14 · October 22, 2015, 12:28am

Here’s another dragon I’m working on. The idea was to make a dragon about the size of a mouse, and have it running around in holes in walls, and stealing cheese from mouse traps.

GPS14 · October 23, 2015, 1:33am

The lesser gecko dragon:

GPS14 · October 24, 2015, 1:08am

Here’s an image I made for the weekend challenge:

GPS14 · October 31, 2015, 1:08am

A model for 3D printing:

GPS14 · November 3, 2015, 4:42am

A sheep, with focus on low render time. This took 1:26.44 seconds:

GPS14 · November 3, 2015, 4:44am

And another creature:

GPS14 · November 9, 2015, 1:39am

Wow, a whole month without a single comment! I shouldn’t complain, it’s probably been a lot longer for others.

Joey_Blendhead · November 9, 2015, 9:11am

LOL! I love your dragons, but man, the other stuff is a bit sloppy… Your dragons are A+ though

GPS14 · November 9, 2015, 11:06pm

I know they’re sloppy, that’s why I’d like critiques.
Thanks about the dragons though. BTW, I liked your old avatar better.

PhoenixSmith · November 10, 2015, 5:32am

The dragon going for the cheese is great. Keep going!

GPS14 · November 10, 2015, 10:08am

Thanks PhoenixSmith. I’ve actually made a 480 frame animation with it, I just need to add sound.

GPS14 · November 12, 2015, 8:21am

Here’s another sloppy creature I’m working on:

Xraygunner · November 12, 2015, 8:31am

Lol!.. I guess you’re after a little more specific critique than “sloppy”? It does seem that more effort was put into the Gecko Dragon than the rest, but as far as to put a finger on it… I really couldn’t without knowing how you did what you did. Overall it looks like you know what you’re doing though.

Joey_Blendhead · November 12, 2015, 3:14pm

LOL! Bro, not meant to be an insult… Your dragons look like something I could only dream of doing… The latest creature was good tho… But the other stuff is completely mis-proportioned and all. Just something that needs worked on And no, the last one didn’t appear sloppy. And when I said sloppy, I didn’t mean to say that you work carelessly, or whatever.

PS: What’s wrong with my ugly mug?

GPS14 · November 13, 2015, 1:59am

Thanks again for the comments. Here’s some more work on Sloppybeast:

The next step is to add people. Then I plan to fix the scaling on the noise texture, and paint in a displacement map. The grass looks dark like that because of far too much displacement.

PS: I guess I was critiquing your avatar more on color scheme and composition. It’s not what you look like. I solid background might improve it.

GPS14 · November 17, 2015, 4:41am

Some clothes I modeled.

Joey_Blendhead · November 17, 2015, 8:20am

Nice works… The shoulders are a bit big on the shirt, and the shoes are a bit low poly… Beast perfect. I wouldn’t change a thing
The profile pic could definitely use work, but whatever

GPS14 · November 17, 2015, 10:15am

Thanks for the critiques and complements. The shoes do look low-poly, partly because of lack of textures, (all rendered with diffuse only,) and partly because they are low-poly. The shirt does have extra large shoulders. Here’s another WIP:

Joey_Blendhead · November 17, 2015, 11:06am

Ok, and wacky eyes, but cool face.

GPS14 · November 18, 2015, 8:38am

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