Muscles are much too defined. Even lugging around that glass jar all day wouldn’t get you ripped like that. especially in a post-apocalyptic environment where I imagine good nutrition might not be as easy to come by.
yes! yes! yes! You are on the right track, but the details on the vest are still stretched. Also i have a hard time seeing his legs 
Are they still there?
Yes, the legs seem to be quite missing. I had modeled legs for him, but they didnt look well, so i postponed it for sometime and worked more on the overall. I’ll get back to the legs right away though
The legs have been modeled and will be posted soon
I love the scene; it tells an intriguing story. Something about the right arm looks a bit off though. The shoulder is perhaps too small and the forearm has an oddly bulging muscle.
The right arm needs some work, I will admit that. I will get on that as soon as I come back from school tomorrow.
#strugglesofahighschooler
nice work with the post-pro! this is a really cool lookin’ image
If you’re going to work on the arm a bit more, here are my thoughts on it:
-the width of the elbow area seems too thin compared to the bicep
-the deltoid looks very small compared to the size of the bicep
so maybe make the elbow silhouette thicker, the deltoid bigger, and the bicep a little smaller?
This is what I have worked on the arm so far. I worked on this prior to your suggestions, Jeepster, so I haven’t accumulated your opinions on this yet. However, I did work on the deltoid and made it about 1.7 times the mass it was before. Here is a visual update.
The veins look unnatural. I’ll need to work on that.
Nice! I think the deltoid changes really helped
Yes, the arm looks much more natural and balanced now. The diffuse glow around the figure helps account for the lack of sharp shadows. I like it. The character’s proportions are a little bit cartoonish, but it works.
The proportions were purposely done cartoony. See, I was never good at cartoony style, so I thought that, in this project, if I push myself enough, I could make it look cartoony. Plus, I had a realistic concept and a cartoony concept and the latter seemed to look like one that would be best, considering my curfew on time. But thanks guys!
