I think you should focus on the car a bit more (lower camera view a bit). I know, you’re trying to show the sky and the mountains, but that dark Mask is covering up the car, which should be the point of interest of the whole scene. I suggest lowering the lens size and moving the camera a bit closer to the car (might require re-sizing the background, to fit the car in the lane properly).
Otherwise looks awesome. Almost indistinguishable from professional marketing render 