Doctor Who Toon


Focused critique is welcome- im planning on adding a body and a scene

I would need to see this in more context to really know what I think of it. It could swerve into either cute cartoon or a creepy doll. As is, it looks like some stop-motion style animation would look good with it.

Also, is that a slice of pizza in his hair?

Yeah, im working on a scene, just trying to figure out the material right now… hopefully more on the cute side

And yes, that does look like a slice of pizza XD Its just a weird reflection because of flat shading

do you guys think the lips should have color?

Update:

Im trying to get the ambient occlusion to work better in the hair… when I bring up the ‘n’ menu and go to shading-.ambient occlusion it looks pretty good. So how can I get my final image to have those shadows? I’ve already baked AO, but the shadows barely there…

no AO (screenshot)


with AO (I circled places with good shadows)

So, how can I make my AO as powerful as the one in the viewport?

this illustrates my point better:



Update:


Still working on the AO maps

Everything looks great, but his hair looks like it belongs to Andre Dice Clay.

I am also a little confused. Is this Doctor 10 or 11? regardless each one had a little bit of a right handed combing of the hair.


hmmm yeah… it’s ten, going off this picture:


There’s a lot of other pictures where his hair is like that^ too, he seems to have two styles

I promise it’ll look better when I’m done :stuck_out_tongue: