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Artwork Focused Critiques
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This is an idea i came up with a few days ago, now I’m not sure what can be improved. Any ideas?

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2

Not sure how to look at it. After looking up some references I understand it now.
The foreground and the background look composited to me, the materials, aand the lighting seems different to me.
I would change the position of the camera and a seamless transition to the fore-, and background. I like more the lighting of the background than the foreground.

3

Maybe add something for us to use to determine scale?

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  1. Everything looks too flat like two images pasted together.
  2. The scale looks off, i think the tunnel needs to be bigger,
  3. The tunnel goes down too fast, we should be able to see more of it