Angry Rabbit


This cartoon was based on a 2-D drawing that I did.
EDIT: Changed the hand to a fist.

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Any critiques would be appreciated. I’d like to know how I can improve.

Very cute! But it doesn’t look that angry to me. Maybe if you changed the paw not holding the carrot to be a fist? That would also make it seem more natural (the current very straight fingers looks a bit odd to me).

I would just say to bend its fingers and thumb little bit on the right hand to make it not robot like. Or even make the right hand into a fist since the rabbit looks threatening if you even think about taking his carrot. Looks great!

It look cool. It mades me remember somehow to Pixar or Disney movies. The only thing that looks weird to me are the ears with those triangles edges.

Great advice! I didn’t think about that. You’re totally right.

Triangle edges? I’m not quite sure what you mean…

I suppose he’s referring to the sharp borders in the ears.

Reminds me of the Presto short from Pixar. Don’t mess with the bunny’s carrot. Looks good.

Thank you!

The closed hand completes it, great job now he looks more serious; hes like " I Dare you to touch this carrot" or “Watch you lookin at”! I luv it!