Butterfly story

work is on

still early effort

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First of all - there’s some very nice use of colour and texture - and nice, simple screen composition… And nice animation on the caterpillar… The only flaw I can see… and this is something that really annoys me but doesn’t seem to bother anyone else as professional animators are always making the same mistake… butterflies do not fly in straight lines. It’s a nice touch that you’ve made the butterfly flap faster to rise - but you’ve essentially animated him like a large bird. This is probably something that only bothers me.

Thanks a lot. The caterpillar was so much harder that I spent most energy there. Butterflies were rather quick and weak. I watched some reference videos and their flight was almost too complex to follow. Maybe another project…

I love your bug. LOL