The Shattered Alliance [Story Game]

Hello all,
I’ve recently been wanting to tell a story, so I decided what better way to do it then through a game! I’ve only been working on this for a short while, but I want to get the demo out there for some input. LOTS of improvement to be seen in the future!


Here’s the demo. Tell me what you think!
http://gamejolt.com/games/adventure/the-shattered-alliance/40328/