good day.)
This is my first job, I decided to put up for criticism.
I hope you like it.
18 hours is time well spent, and it shows very clearly. The rain needs to be improved, unless this is a certain artistic style. The reason I note this is because it doesn’t blend too well with the rest of the scenery. Everything else is well and great, especially the figure behind the girl; it conveys much more story detail with great work on transparent objects. I also see potential for an animation of some sort. So keep the work up!
thank you.)
Yes, I agree, with rain in big trouble. It did not work as originally intended.
but nothing …
learn from your mistakes.)