Hey guys, this is my first time entering an 11 Second Club competition, and I could use some critiques while I sill have the time to touch it up!
It’s really good, man. I personally found it a little disconcerting that I couldn’t see the face of the guy who was talking most of the time, but that could just be a personal thing. The body language was really good. lots of expression there. On a slightly unrelated note, if you use the “insert video” button, it’ll imbed the video in the thread.
EDIT: Having watched it a second time, I see that the face is visible most of the time, it’s just the first shot that gives an uncomfortable feeling. Again though, probably just me.
Thank you (both for the notes and the video tip)! I’ll play around with shot choices and see if anything feels smoother.