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This is the result of my project. I had two goals:

  1. create more convincing photorealism
  2. practise composition techniques

I would really appreciate tips and tricks to improve this work

thx!

Gerard

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hi gerard, an appealing composition. and feels quite real… some suggestions. i believe it would be stronger if cropped from top a little to reduce the blue background/wall a little. to me, it is irritating that the wall is so saturated blue, it catches a lot of attention this way… the ceramic is just wonderful. is the lid still the same material? it does not reflect anything (but might be depending on surrounding and light) the apples too are great. they look tasty and just have the right amount of glossy… the cloth texture looks real, only the boundery is too “perfect”. a real cloth would have ever so slghtly wobbles and maybe even some threads loose at the boundery. …

Hi Doris,

Thanks for the feedback. I followed your suggestions as well as I could. The result is much better. I still strugling to improve the side of the table-cloth. But still, it is much better than before. Thx!