Beryl Valley IV: Alex

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It’s nice that it is progressing, but after seeing episode 3 and 4, I don’t know. The sound quality on the voices are awful. They sound muffled sometimes and you can barely hear what they are saying to each other. The animation is still slow. On episode 3, the camera needs to be adjusted where you don’t see the blue space as you make the camera move. The characters are also stiff as statues unless you decide to make them move. Have the characters move around and do something in the background to make it more lively. On episode four, the camera was zooming into the house in the woods. Everything around it was not up to scale.

And I thank you again, XeroShadow for your insight. I know I still have a lot t learn, a I keep my story developing.