Hi everyone!
I’m a brazilian CG artist and I’m trying realy hard to get better in the trade! 
Can you please give me a true critique on this F-4 Phantom image that I’m making?
Thanks a lot!
the water doesn’t look right, imo. also, there would be some spray I think from the thrust of the jets engines on the water.
It needs to be shown at a different angle. Looks a bit flat to me.
also the lighting need some work.
I think is not the right camera, for a good render
I’ve made some changes. The black background is going to be clear sky or something like that. Tell me what you guys think!
I think that that angle is a lot better than before! The composition looks pretty nice but i think the plane lacks detail. I don’t know if you will be adding that later but that’s the only thing I can come up with. Cheers 