Star Gazers Loft

Trying some Arc-viz with out reference photos.
I welcome any thoughts on this scene.
Thanks in advance.
Els


A realistic looking space the beams, the bricks, the duct work. It’s a shame there is so much reflection on the glass I would like to be able to gaze out at the starry night.

The lighting… there is a lamp on the bedside table but it doesn’t appear to light its own base. the desk seems unnaturally lit… the posters seem to glow (maybe that’s on purpose) and the bookshelf and overhead ducts seem to be overly lit by a point light outside the window… something’s weird with the pillow/sheet texture, looking like it bleeds onto the desk. Maybe that’s a pillow that is perfectly horizontal in outline, maybe tilt it a bit.

I’m just an intermediate Blenderhead so take my comments with a grain of salt.

Also, maybe my lighting comments are thrown off by the title of the image making me think it should be dark outside…