Hey guys! Its been a long time, This is my recent Project.
Sculpted that monster in dynamic sculpt and then remeshed by snapping points. I think theres room for improvement… Please leave your feedback!
Thanks…
The concept behind is that a little scenario where a kid and his grandfather visits a lonely beach. Wondering how this creature stepped on their sand. : )
I like the lighting you have used, and it’s definitely a creative idea.
I think you should experiment with a closeup of the Grandpa and grandson with possibly an expression of shock. I realize that to do that you would not be able to see the entire fish in the camera frame, but I feel it would be worth trying out.
For me, the most enjoyable works tell a story. While your modeling and textures are excellent, your current composition minimizes “Grandpa and me” to the point where I had to look for them. You might consider moving your camera a bit closer to them so that they, rather than the monster, are the focal point of the composition. That means losing some of the wonderful monster but, I think that the monster would give the impression of being even more monstrous if it continued out of the frame. Your figures could be posed to be looking up, for instance, which would convey the size of the thing.
Very good work nonetheless and you can take my observations for what they’re worth.
I really like this 123ERTYY! My only crits would be that I’m not sure whats going on with the creatures mouth,
it looks to be both an inside and outside bulge at the same time. Also I’m not sure what those bright spots in
the sand left of the figures and the one big one left of the creatures tail are.