What do you think of my composition?

https://soundcloud.com/user5999551/epic-action-battle-music

EDIT: NEW VERSION (Longer, better).

https://soundcloud.com/user5999551/extreme-battle-music

I need some feedback on this before uploading it to YouTube.

Sounds good! Only thing I am concerned about is that it doesn’t change much over its runtime. What is it for? If it’s for a game/movie then it obviously has to match the scene. If it’s to stand alone, then I’d rather it change in volume, tempo or something a few times. But reall,y it sounds great, I listened to it a few times and I like it.

Thanks. I have edited it. Made it longer (4 minutes!!!)

https://soundcloud.com/user5999551/extreme-battle-music

It changes a lot now. Still the same main theme though.