shortfilm GLSL render

dear artists

please see the link below.
This video is submitting before you for your suggestions for improvement.

please know while reviewing the video:

Audio used is a dummy one which will be replaced with original sounds later.

camera placement and movements are not final

I myself will do the following modifications

shot 7 to 14 - Background as well as a wiggle effect to get a hand held shot experience

shot 20 - camera Y rotation will be zero

shot 22 - frames 516 to 677 - Head requires follow through animation and face requires some expressions

shot 23 - frames 925 to 975 - there will be some wiggle and lighting effect to express the danger.

shot 24 - frames 180 to 215 - there will be a bit wiggle effect to show the imact of falling

editing issue - transition from shot 22 to 23 will be corrected.

further suggestions for corrections will be a great help for me…

https://youtu.be/z_-qZ_9TxmI

thank you all…