For a Job Critique

Hi guys,

This is my second job on blender, I’ve recently start to promote my services and I had a really good start with two very good jobs and I am very glad and surprised!

I need feedback on this render.

Attached is also the customer sketch :wink:


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Thanks guys!

Congratulations man! I think You can use other color for the back ground to get some contrast and maybe a texture to the red walls, it is looking awesome.

Good start to this. My thoughts are the stools look too small and very uncomfortable.

Thanks for the comments! Backround color and stools are two thing I was thinking!
I am thinking on tweek the back ligh in order to make the edges pop up!

Thanks again!

Needs a dark background.
Very nice.
So lucky. I would love to get a job in Blender.

Hi! this is the progress based on the remarks the customer gave me. Perhaps it’s not what I prefered from my point of view but she loved it, and signed me for two more jobs !

thanks guys!! A percentaje from my monthly earning is going to flow to blender fundation! maybe it’s no too much, but it’s the way I will say thanks to blender!! :wink: