Subway Station - Critique / feedback please


Full3d environment for a short movie sequence. (almost full, some cheats around)
Matrix inspired.Any feedback would be really appreciated.
Thanks in advance.

all the best,

norberto

Really nice work.

The two elements I see missing are the lack of a driver and no railroad ties.

It looks great!, Although I feel like the top of the rails should be brighter from the trains passing through. Also this scene would benefit volumetric lighting. It will make it look amazing! Also I would add some dirt particles floating in the air and some on the lens.

Other then that, it is looking great :slight_smile:

Hi RJshae… thank you for your time and comments.
Well the driver is there, in a blue tshirt: will be replaced maybe by a live action footage.

Hey Ferrettank… you’re right: some volumetric lighting and particles in the air would be great ! i will do it for sure.
Thanks for your time and comments.

Hello friends.
this is my final image. thanks for your feedback, i hope you like it.
Now i’m working on the first camera position (as this is the end position).

Gonna submit this to the finished artwork forum…

http://www.estudioindigo.com.br/norberto/wp-content/uploads/2014/04/subway_pos2.jpg

kind regards,

norberto

The flares are beautifull !! The lighting in general is well done too. Have you been inspired by the subway fight scene in Matrix ??