im not one to usually bump my own thread, but this has slipped down to the 3rd page with no comments…Usually I get at-least one (no seriously…one is normally all I get for some reason)
i’ve had the same issue with my Yamaha-thread so I understand To me the interior looks quite good although I think there’s A LOT of space in this room But the exterior could be a little bit improved - maybe an HDRI with a sunny-cloudy sky would help…
Your render is very nice and the models/textures are convincing, too. I agree with glooblooz about the noticeable openness of the room, which is emphasized by the expansive and featureless backyard. The repeated horizontal lines of the long image format and long shadows from the window say to my eyes, “look at all this empty floor space.” Several things might mitigate this effect, like maybe a narrower upper molding (so the wall looks taller), turning on the lamp, or creating a foreground with some kind of accessory or architecture.