BG Contest entry WIP

Artwork Works in Progress
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This isn’t really far progressed, it’s a composition render (aka I am looking for feedback on the composition, please do provide any hints on the composition)

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Any feedback is appreciated.

If you can’t figure out what all the boxes are:
Brown - trees
Blue - Water
Black - Road
Yellow - House
The boxmen should be obvious enough :stuck_out_tongue:

2

Looks promising!
You could try lowering the camera a bit and bringing it closer to the characters… just a thought. good luck! :smiley:

3

I’ll try that ^^
Oh and good luck to you too (although based on your WIP you hardly need it)

EDIT:
Okay, I did that

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EDIT2: The image is clickable and opens the DA page in a new tab/window (depending on browser preferences) it has a bigger version in case you desire a larger version