Interior

Hey!

Since I have to prepare some applications for a study, I am going to post a lot of works in the next time :slight_smile:

Critique and comments appreciated.

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I like the look here. It has an interesting layout, too. My only crit is that the metal shelves on the stairway (cool idea, btw) could look a little more realistic. It looks a little flat at the moment. Maybe a slight bevel to bring out some light reflection would do the trick. Overall, nice job!

Hi Kev,

I really like your scene, great modeling.
Is it BI or Cycles render?

My “personal” critique is that most edges are a little to hard.
The bump is to high o the wall.
The colors are to strong.
The white wall is to white, it’s 100% white at some places and gets blown out.

A quick retouch of your image is just a attempt on how it could look with less color and a little soft glow and a tiny amount of noise/grain added.
This is just my personal taste :eyebrowlift:

Cheers