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Sago
30-Sep-06, 07:38
What's up kids.

Here's my first short animation. Yeah, I said first, so don't expect anything fancy.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v483/sago/Title-MiM.jpg


Clickie here (http://download.blender.org/demo/movies/bc06/Sago_ManInMan.avi) XviD, 13,3 Mb






Also a special big thanks and big hug to the person for hosting the animation the first days:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v483/sago/Pics/BWC/Wu-Man.jpg

Wu-Man, thanks a bunch. ♥♥



Anyway, hope you people like it,

Sago

The M.h.p.e.
30-Sep-06, 07:43
First post!

Downloading now...can't wait to see what you've cooked up for us this time!
//Mathias

EDIT:
Watched it now. Too good man! Too far out! Haha!:D

5 stars from me!
//Mathias

BleedForMe
30-Sep-06, 07:48
awesome, great...

jazzroy
30-Sep-06, 07:51
wonderful!
you always show talented skills and a great sense of humor :)

enricoceric
30-Sep-06, 07:53
Ha Ha Sago, fun and crazy, just great.

It's a while I didn't came back on this forum, lot of work ! And it was a pleasure to come back with that funny movie.
I liked the smoothness and the talking. I would probably tried to get a more "from inside" voice, but that's really nice anyway.

Congrat for a first anim.

BleedForMe
30-Sep-06, 07:59
I agree with enricoderic, try putting in a little reverb

OTO
30-Sep-06, 08:02
Hello
I guess that if you show this work to an animation studio, you're engaged
Tecnically excelent
In the other side the animation/story don't stand the movie lenght
But I'm far from the good person to talk about "toon" movies
I barely like them
Probably you should animate/distort the character more?!
Anyway, high level work
Bye

foCus
30-Sep-06, 08:22
Great short Sago :D love it!

paulR
30-Sep-06, 08:24
Hahaha, great!
Just the right amount of *weird*, to make it hilarious. ^^


Could be snappier(?) in parts, though. Like more rapid eye movement.. etc.

Super Wu-Man
30-Sep-06, 09:13
great stuff dude,

my favorite parts were
the baby losing its mind in the very first segment, cracks me up
the lines, "what a minute", "i must be losing my mind", and "i can still hear sombody breathing", haha!

i look forward to more animations, more characters and more dialog!! by the way this wasnt as good as your other animation "man on man"........:eek:

Lasphere
30-Sep-06, 10:00
hahahahahahahahahahahahaha I love it! Ist that made from your image for that contest.. That.. hm.. the one where i asked a super idiotic question.. hmm.. whatever.. Love the movie.. hahahahah

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v483/sago/CSCC.jpg

Lasphere
30-Sep-06, 10:22
oh and how do you go about moddeling hands?

Wereaser
30-Sep-06, 10:30
Five stars. Enough said.

Edeehem
30-Sep-06, 12:24
What in the world?! That must be one of the wackies 3d animation I've ever seen. Freaking weird and awesome!
5*****

Blenderist
30-Sep-06, 12:30
Great!!! 5 starts.

Oh and by the way.
I started work on my version of Super Wu. Hope you don't mind :P

slikdigit
30-Sep-06, 12:47
really cool! funny bit of animation, even if I lost my lunch :)

Milky
30-Sep-06, 13:29
That was fun, Sago! :)

therebirthed
30-Sep-06, 14:03
That's a nice animation ! But when will the insided character get out ? :D !
When I watched it for the first time, I could feel his hand in my mouth ! lol ;) !

Very good work again ! :) !

ChojinDSL
30-Sep-06, 14:36
Hahaha...awesome!

Very good looking skin by the way. Would be cool to see that animation done with an SSS shader.

**update**

You know, the more I look at the animation the better that skin looks. Wow. Did you use SSS?

effstops
30-Sep-06, 14:40
That was awesome, man!

kitsu
30-Sep-06, 15:18
:eek:
Man that was good! The models, the textures, the animation - Great! And the audio is really good too. The main characters voice was a bit odd in a few places, but the timing and sound effects were perfect!

It's kind of depressing actually... You had a full production staff and a couple of months to do this right :confused: And you're actually an ex-lead animator from Pixar right?

Very high level of finish every where, good work :(

Aligorith
30-Sep-06, 17:40
Haha... that was great work Sago!

It's great seeing some more animations being made with blender, and such neat ones too.

Aligorith

Toudou
30-Sep-06, 19:42
Really good, Sago.
I like it.

Roger
30-Sep-06, 20:09
That's real fun and crazy Sacha, to be expected of course :).

The character is really incredible and has lovely materials. The animation has it's own unique style, absolutely perfect for this animation! The way the hand goes in and out of the mouth is really cool. Very cool!

Lancer
30-Sep-06, 20:24
Yeepers! Very inspiring stuff - wow.

bugman_2000
30-Sep-06, 20:43
I can't download this. Maybe I'm timing out because I'm in Japan. How big is it?

henrymop
30-Sep-06, 21:06
I didn't like it that much(just my personal view, I do think it is well made), but I'm realived that you're sence of humor had class.

@bugman: It 8mb.

Sago
30-Sep-06, 22:00
I can't download this. Maybe I'm timing out because I'm in Japan. How big is it?
Geez man, is this your subtle way of saying that you're in Japan? Yeah, like henrymop said, it's 8 Mb, don't know why it's not working for you. If you got any problems concerning the downloading, just take it up with the host Wu-Man.


Anyway, thanks for all the replies.

I myself kinda agree with OTO, the story and animation could be better for this lenght. The original idea had more (dynamic) jokes, but while making it lots got lost. Started depending too much on the weirdness. Dunno....



Ist that made from your image for that contest.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v483/sago/CSCC.jpg

Yep, started it that weekend. I already had the idea for this animation, and that WC seemed a great time to start. 2 flies in 1 hit. So I made the animation within 1 month.


oh and how do you go about moddeling hands?
I dunno, just push some verts or something. So I guess it doesn't bother you the hand has only 3 fingers and 1 thumb?


ChojinDSL - no SSS shader. Just a rampshader (a bit of red in the shadow-areas).



That's real fun and crazy Sacha, to be expected of course :).

Are we on a first name basis already? Well, I'm okay with that, Francy.

haha, just kidding Sander. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v483/sago/Pics/Emoticons/big_smile.gif


henrymop - I'm totally cool with it. Can't please you all..... but did you say my sense of humor had class? That's.... so.... uncool.... kinda harsh, man...... kinda harsh......... haha

bugman_2000
30-Sep-06, 22:10
Geez man, is this your subtle way of saying that you're in Japan?Actually, it was my subtle way of saying how bout you post it on a more accessible host, like, say yousendit.com or 4shared.com? No offense to Wu or anything...

I don't know if it's true of Japan only, but I've had a few cases where I've found that certain, ahem, European servers seem to somehow manage to drop the the first two WWs in WWW.

Ah... Just noticed Toudou managed to download it... DOH!

Super Wu-Man
30-Sep-06, 22:42
Oh and by the way.
I started work on my version of Super Wu. Hope you don't mind :P
i will answer for him.......yes he is ok with it......and he would like you to begin right away......now......go now.....Super Wu!


you got any problems concerning the downloading, just take it up with the host Wu-Man.
or you can take it up with my right fist (thunder) and my left fist (lightning)

kaeru
30-Sep-06, 23:13
LOL

Good job man :).

Peace :).

mustangryder66
30-Sep-06, 23:52
Awesome work Sago, I've seen some awesome work made from Blender and I still can't believe all this from a freeware 3D software. Oh and I also checked out your photobucket, kool characters and great sense of humor.
Daniel

Felix_Kütt
01-Oct-06, 00:24
lo0ol as allways, goooood stuff, cgtalk stuff for sure, have you posted it there?

Sago
01-Oct-06, 05:30
Ah... Just noticed Toudou managed to download it... DOH!
Then I guess I can't help you with that one.... so for the 2000th time, stop bugging me, man! haha, get it? Bugging me, man? For the 2000th time? Get it?..... okay.... that was stupid. henrymop will think twice calling my sense of humor classy.


kaeru - thanks man. Peace back at ya.


mustangryder66 - Thanks Daniel. yeah, it's still amazing Blender is free. It's an awesome program, and the only limitations are we as the users.


lo0ol as allways, goooood stuff, cgtalk stuff for sure, have you posted it there?
Nope, no CGTalk yet. Mainly cause I'm not using my own bandwidth, and I haven't got a clue how fast it would go there.


Love y'all,
Sago

Husam
01-Oct-06, 07:58
This is solid work man. You could pretty easily win a suzanne award for this.

bugman_2000
01-Oct-06, 09:01
I just pinged simplecartoons.com and nothing came back. I don't know how other people are getting this, but that domain doesn't exist for me. Can somebody post it at www.yousendit.com or someplace? I'm dying to see it.

Sago
01-Oct-06, 09:11
Please don't die, it's absolutely not worth it.

Do you want it to be sent to your hotmail? I can try yousendit, but msn is also an option.

Nebular
01-Oct-06, 12:06
It's just hillarious. Well thought!

Alden
01-Oct-06, 12:36
Lol, that was messed up... The... Outside man? was a little too static at some times- needed more eye twitching :D

Well, I can at least say it was original... 4 stars

Trevin
01-Oct-06, 20:17
Great job Sago! Five stars.

bugman_2000
01-Oct-06, 21:32
Sago, this rocks. Really fantastic. Nice job.

MARTS
02-Oct-06, 03:29
Hahahahah very funny Sago .Your character is nice :) .

BgDM
02-Oct-06, 08:02
That was friggin priceless Sago. Great logo and jingle at the start. That is perfect.

Animation was very cool and also a great little story line.

BgDM

Felix_Kütt
02-Oct-06, 11:47
BGdm, you forgot the suden, cool, ending ;)

thoro
02-Oct-06, 13:09
Hey Sago - that was really cool. I like the idea, the way you animated it (Grab... Pull... haha!) and your shaders.

Great stuff!

Thorsten

keywee
02-Oct-06, 13:34
Well done Sago,

That is a really cool animation. Looks really good and the story is very original.

bboyclike
02-Oct-06, 21:55
i think you should try out for pixar! exelent! 5 stars!

Fweeb
02-Oct-06, 23:30
I like it!

Sago
03-Oct-06, 07:31
Thanks people, I'm glad I could entertain you all.

I just changed the host for the animation. Please let me know if there are any problems downloading... or even let me know if it works, cause I haven't got a clue.

Love y'all,
Sago

yogyog
03-Oct-06, 07:57
Wow - that really is quite desturbing.

Veeery good. no crits at all.

BgDM
03-Oct-06, 08:40
Welcome to the gallery Sago. Well deserved with this one.

BgDM

popski
03-Oct-06, 08:46
Yesssss!!!! Bravo Maestro!! Haaaa, O, Ho, Ho, Ho, Aaaaa, ... Excellent!! Sago 4 the next Orange Team!!!

-Storm-
03-Oct-06, 09:33
That is awesome, looks awesome! And the voice reminds me of Apes voice from oddworld, really Cool!

@ndy
03-Oct-06, 10:23
lmao that was really funny, great job sago! :D

.andy

rakhi
03-Oct-06, 10:51
Great movie. Idea is excellent!:D:D:D

venomgfx
03-Oct-06, 12:50
great job Sago =)

Really nice style you got there,

cheers!
venomgfx

patdog
03-Oct-06, 13:24
Got enough praise yet? Excellent work! Can't wait to see some of your other pics moving :P

Sago
03-Oct-06, 16:42
Got enough praise yet?
It's tough, but I think I can cope with it.... http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v483/sago/Pics/Emoticons/big_smile.gif


But seriously, much appreciated. When I finished the animation I couldn't see anymore if it was good or funny or not. I was also busy overcoming my technical stupidity, think that worked out okay for this animation.

Get well soon,
Sago

Alden
03-Oct-06, 18:25
It's kind of surprising to me that this is your first animation- so much detailed movement, great use of shape keys... Nothing that a first time animation usually has. Whenever I see the words "First animation", I expect a rotating cube, but seeing this obviously changed that...

Framedworld
04-Oct-06, 12:56
Loved it! I should really read the whole thing before asking a question that was already answered!

AndyD
04-Oct-06, 13:10
Well done Mr Goedegebure (don't want to cause any "first name basis" offence).

The breathing action was excellent - nice head versus body movement. I don't want you to give anything away - but is that Super WuMan stuck in that guy's stomach?

Suzanne finalist for sure.

Sago
05-Oct-06, 07:19
Alden - Thanks. I'm sure I had my 'rotating cubes' phase in the very beginning, when it comes to animating. All necessary to learn the ins and outs. But they were just tests, I would never even concider showing them as an animation, when some other people would. It's all about setting your own standards a wee bit higher.

Mr D - Thanks. The breathing action was actually quite easy. I had 3 bones: one for the body, one for the head and one for the jaw. For breathing I just needed to move the body-bone up and down; with auto-IK enabled the head moved in the opposite direction automatically.
Btw, no Wu-Man inside their. dunno why, but I called him Roger.

Lasphere
05-Oct-06, 09:40
Then what about heads? how do you go about moddeling heads? Box-moddeling?

Sago
05-Oct-06, 11:19
Sorry, no boxmodelling. I mostly start with a cube, make a nose out of it, and from there it's just a matter of extruding and moving verts.

Rickyx
05-Oct-06, 13:24
Great animation!! Yes I think is boring... but also for the big man to have someone speaking inside...

Also your host is really ok for me... 700kb/s... never had before...

Lasphere
05-Oct-06, 14:56
Sorry, no boxmodelling. I mostly start with a cube, make a nose out of it, and from there it's just a matter of extruding and moving verts.
thats sounds very much like box moddeling too me.. ;)

Sago
05-Oct-06, 16:22
thats sounds very much like box moddeling too me.. ;)
No, it ain't, you sillybuns. Only the nose is box modeled, the rest is edge modeled.

Felix_Kütt
05-Oct-06, 20:24
edge extruded* ^^ and yeah i use basicaly the same, its good, actual its called "itsallgood"

DeeVad
05-Oct-06, 21:49
Great short , make me want to check my mouth, lol

deathblood
07-Oct-06, 04:01
Cool man!Really like the lighting and materials.
5 star from me,good job!

Darkmast49
07-Oct-06, 16:35
Sheer brilliance! I like it!

MadMesh
08-Oct-06, 19:26
Absolutely brilliant, loved it :)

UglyMike
09-Oct-06, 03:17
Just great!! Loved every second of it! Great voice characterisation too. (" Man, I'm bored...". Hilarious.)

For me, this is one of the best Blender 'shorts' (others would be shorts like MiniThru aka Chicken Chair and Infinitum.)
One of the few shorts that can stand on it's own (in stead of being a "Hey, look what Blender can do!")
The form of the short also makes it a nice candidate for translating to .3GP and playing it on Mobiles.

Marve
09-Oct-06, 10:47
Some months ago I saw that character in your photobucket, freaky! Now it is animated, yay! Btw, I like your work and your style!
This one is great, but I'm gettin ill when the hand comes up, and that finger-in-the-mouth-almost-causing-vomiting-sound comes :D
The only thing that bothers me, is that he has only got 4 fingers, but that's a detail. Good work, good result, good (but short) entertainment! :)

aapke
10-Oct-06, 07:03
yup i agree with the others realy cool cant make it better

Jacco
17-Oct-06, 15:59
haha, you cracked me up, sago.

I'd love to have seen roger crawl out of the guy's mouth. or someone to actually pull roger out!

Jacco;

PS: you've got andy's blessing.. this is going the podium.

nitrofreak06
17-Oct-06, 22:27
i downloaded it but all i see is a black screen. im running it in windows media player 10. any suggestions to get it going?

Friday13
18-Oct-06, 00:30
Sago, that's just brilliant, and hilarious! Can't say much, since they ---^ already said everything and more, but I'd like to see more of these animations with that great sense of humor of yours.


i downloaded it but all i see is a black screen. im running it in windows media player 10. any suggestions to get it going?

Try using VLC (http://www.videolan.org/).

Modron
18-Oct-06, 03:33
heheh, pretty good job sagor, er, sago, but one question, where the hell is SuperWu? What is this non-SuperWu stuff?

Sago
18-Oct-06, 13:00
The only thing that bothers me, is that he has only got 4 fingers, but that's a detail.
Argh... I knew I forgot something...... okay, not really. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v483/sago/Pics/Emoticons/big_smile.gif Btw, every fingers also has just 2 bones.


nitrofreak06 - don't know man. Do you have the xvid codec (http://www.xvidmovies.com/codec/)? You can also try the version here (http://www.blender3d.com/cms/Festival_2006.808.0.html).



heheh, pretty good job sagor, er, sago, but one question, where the hell is SuperWu? What is this non-SuperWu stuff?
I am very versatile. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v483/sago/Pics/Emoticons/eyebrow2.gif

AnRk
19-Oct-06, 12:34
HAHAHAHAH
beautiful, and hilarious....



and gross

LGM
22-Oct-06, 15:09
Ha, that was pretty funny. (Grr. you get it all: Blender Gallery, Suzanne Award . . . lucky bugger.)

Heh, congrats on all that. There's not much else to say that hasn't already been said. Really liked the weight on the head motion when the hand would come out and jerk it around. Would've liked more head movement when the hand was in perhaps, but that's probably just me.

So awesome work, and congratulations again!

LGM

Wanted Bob
22-Oct-06, 17:46
Heh, that was some good comic stuff there. Nice job on the modeling and the animations.

Wanted Bob

$u!cidE
28-Oct-06, 18:14
Very NICE!!!

5 Stars!!!!

4Daniel
23-Nov-06, 10:13
Some pretty cool stuff you got there, pal. The Outer Man does get static at the end, which makes it a bit lifeless, but still, it's brilliant. By your standards it's still some years 'till my first animation... :(

Seriously, Pixar would be glad to have you in the team! WHAT ARE YOU STILL DOING IN HOLLAND?!?!?

Keep up the great work!

Sago
23-Nov-06, 17:30
Thanks all, especially LGM.... must've been really hard, because he hates my guts now. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v483/sago/Pics/Emoticons/big_smile.gif

Hey 4Daniel, thanks... but where the hell have you been? Anyway, no need to despair, you're still young, you'll get there eventually.


Never stop believing in Rock'n'Roll http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v483/sago/Pics/Emoticons/RocknRoll.gif

Sago

Ic3Cold
23-Nov-06, 19:54
Great stuff.
I really enjoyed that. Great inspiration for a young blenderhead such as myself.
Thanks! Quite amusing.

Aidan
29-Nov-06, 18:25
Thats madsnake

amped
01-Dec-06, 02:16
That was pretty cool Sago. Wow cant wait to see what will happen when your animation skills get as good as your modelling ones!

Though I would like to have seen the animaton of the man being ripped out of the old guys mouth though :P

Sago
03-Dec-06, 05:51
Thanks guys.


btw Amped, you've got a really cool avatar. Yeah, haha.... thought I should let you know....

Sago

Sean-Michael
03-Dec-06, 21:42
I hoping that someone can point in in the direction to get a media player that plays these .avi files, I have winamp and wmp11 but neither of these are working, is there codecs I need?

Thanks in advance!

Sean-Michael
03-Dec-06, 22:13
I found that VLC plays these, cool animation, I kept waiting for him to come out lol!

amped
08-Dec-06, 01:51
Yeah Sago, its sexier than a picture of me :P

sdil
08-Dec-06, 04:54
Wow, that is good job. Can we know how many you pays for ResPower ?