Mr. Eloquence

[VictorSilva]

Hi artists,

This is my recent study:

http://img271.imageshack.us/img271/2637/mreloquence4yc.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[BgDM]

Excellent character. Has some real personality.

Love the shaders too. Maybe the clothes have a bit too much specular on them though.

BgDM

[C0Rkn0T]

really cool.

I have always been trying to do cartoon character but i always failed.

great expresion too. :D

[N-Gon]

He is supposed to be gay right? *serious post*

[DadCantDraw]

He's great! Very evocative. Oddly, the four toes don't bother me, but in the second pose the hands look a little too E.T.

[Arowe]

Looks really good! Biggest issue with me is that the toes are obvious duplicates of eachother, and the feet look a little too square to me. Other than that, nice work!

[allanbs]

Very good victor!!

Can you show us some wireframe?

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Allan Brito

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[RONIN]

Nice!
Its good that you posted 3 different expression.Wolud love to see him animated.

[narven]

NIce once, amasing expresion :) reaaly cool character... reminds me of Pixar characters :)

[Boder]

He's a cool guy. I would like for him to grow a new finger though.

[VictorSilva]

Thanks to all for the critics and commentaries.

allanbs - certainly

Wire:

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/3420/wiremreloquence9xr.jpg

[garphik]

great character man. Lovely expressions a lil jimmy neutrony style

cool stuff, an animation would be cooler
:thumbsup:

[postlogic]

I really like this. He does have some personality.

The only problem I see is that his eyelids never change, regardless of the expression.

[Michael_R.]

very nice, they are looking quite funny :D

[DeeVad]

wonderfull work !

[Naive Amoeba]

That's really really cool. I love the style; very pixar-ish. The third expression is great, and I can feel a lot of emotion in the character. Good stuff. Oh yeah, and like someone said above ^^^ rigging the eyelids would make it even better

Matt.

[Aligorith]

Great job ;)

I love the different expressions, and also the texturing.

As others have commented, the feet look a bit on the blocky side. Only having four toes is not too bad actually. Also, there seems to be a lack of variation in the eyelids.

An animation featuring this character would be neat...

Aligorith

[Piro]

I like it a lot.
How did you render the wire??

[Serialsiner]

Lovely and very expressive character. I love your style: simple and efficient. Now I'm waiting for the anim ...

See y@
Serialsiner

[Yoshi_Rider]

That looks awesome!!!'

And how did you render that wire???

[ChooDaddy]

Very nice... that 4 finger thing creeps me out though... am i the only one??

[Sago]

that 4 finger thing creeps me out though... am i the only one??
No no no, that's Walt Disney all the way. Works great when you have cartoony characters (it worked for me many times).

And works great on this one too. Character is simple but effective. Materials could've been a littlebitty better though (especially hair and black clothes).

Sago

[VictorSilva]

thanks to all again, always learning...

Piro, Yoshi_Rider,

Well, to make a wireframe like that you have to first duplicate de model (the models overlap eachother). Then in one model i setup the material with a grey color. The other model have a white material with the Wire option turned on and the emit setup to 1.

After that i just increase a bit the size of the model with the wire material, and it's done!

[Piro]

WOW
this guy is very smart
Good job

[Milky]

That's some nice work, VictorSilva! Excellent topology. Like your idea on rendering wireframe. :)